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Post by fearless. on Oct 17, 2008 22:53:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]LOOKY[/glow] [glow=red,2,300]LOOKY[/glow] HERE[glow=red,2,300]they call me rapture[/glow]
&&Lil Ol [shadow=red,left,300]Bashful[/shadow] Batty Has Some Landguess what?
so i think im gonna do something about it [glow=red,2,300]WE FIGHT
-300 words minimum
-If I lose I get to rechalleng whenever I wish
-If you lose you never return
-If you don't fight then...I get your land and a mare of my choice from your herd
[/glow] **all of these terms are non negotiable[glow=red,2,300]Come on, Batty.
I want to play.[/glow]
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Post by Spitz on Oct 18, 2008 3:52:35 GMT -5
Batty heard the unwelcoming sound of a stallion trying to challenge him "why do they do this...when they can just be part of my herd and a high ranking" he wandered toward the stallion and sighed "please umm...Raptor isn't it? Well please can you withdraw your battle and I will give you the position of Duke, you can breed with any mare of your choosing but not the lead and you will help me with all the decisions made here" he smiled hopefully and pawed the ground.
"This is my home rapture, my final place and I wanted to stay here all my life as after my unchangeable past I needed a place to call home" a tear ran down his face as he said these words, he sighed again and then whispered "please Raptor, I will give you anything just don't fight me" he lifted his head but showed no signs of threat to the stallion in front of him so he stepped back "by anything I mean anything...just don't fight me and don't take this place away from me" he looked up again at the stallion, snow started to drift down and land on his chestnut coat but he didn't care, he just waited and watched.
Everything is slipping out of my grasp to quick, first Smoke and now Mountain Springs...oh lord...why me? why? why? why? he thought and his eyes pricked with tears but he forced them away and looked back at the stallion "please Raptor, accept my offer as I love my home so much and I don't want that to change" Batty flicked his tail to get rid of the flies but they kept coming back so he left them and looked at the stallion again.
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Post by fearless. on Oct 18, 2008 16:25:23 GMT -5
Rapture scoffed at the stallion as he spoke. "My name is Rapture. Not Raptor." He pinned his ears back. Not out of anger...just habit. The buckskin stallion thought on what Batty had said and spoke quickly, "Do you really expect me to just give in that easily? I came here for land...not just a position as Duke. I want to fight...or you could give up."
Rapture smirked at the other stallion as he spoke. Did he really want him to just give up? What kind of stag is this? He was trying to give him a guilt trip...well, it wasn't working.
The brown stag chewed his lip thoughtfully and replied, "If you love your home so much then you would fight to keep it. You really can't expect a rival stag to just give up. I will make you an offer right now. If you forfeit the land to me, I will make you Duke. But I refuse to be walked on. If you don't accept my offer, I will fight you...I don't like to fight all that much, but sometimes we have to do things we don't like." Rapture pondered this momentarily before turning his attention back to Batty.
"So...whats it gonna be, Batty?"
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Post by fearless. on Nov 6, 2008 20:34:58 GMT -5
-bump-
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Post by r o x y on Nov 7, 2008 15:03:54 GMT -5
Mona trotted briskly towards the scent that filled her nares. She could plainly smell the scent of her mate, and that of a foreign stallion. Rapture. Mona thought to herself, her audits pinning themselves back at even the thought of the stallion that was trying to take her home away from her mate. She couldn't let that happen, she had to stand by her mate no matter what.
Mona's orbs were trained on the pair, standing there, negotiating. Although there didn't seem to be much negotiation with Rapture. It seemed like it would end in a fight no matter what. Mona trotted beside Batty and halted abruptly at his side. She nudged his shoulder, letting him no she was in this with him, no matter what the outcome would be. She knew his land was important to him, and she would try to keep it in Batty's power the best she could.
Mona scanned the stallion that called himself Rapture. Standing near him made her look very small, but she felt a million hands higher then him. She was prepared to fight beside her mate, as any decent mate would. Her orbs focused on his, as she glared at the threat that stood before her. This was highly unlike her, she was generally a very friendly light mare. This was no time to be friendly though, this stallion was a threat, and no amount of lightness could controls one's anger when threatened.
Rapture, what will it take for you to leave my mate and his land alone? You must have some sort of other demand that will pacify. Name your price, and I will do everything in my power to make that demand come true, as long as you leave this land to Batty. She knew asking him to submit would most likely not wok, but it was worth a shot. If he turned down her offer, that would just make her even more angry, and that would help in a fight.
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Post by Spitz on Nov 7, 2008 15:39:48 GMT -5
Batty had felt as if someone had blessed him with confidance and then he felt Mona nuzzle his shoulder. "Its ok Mona, this land is mine and always will be, we shall fight RaptOR" he laughed by getting the name wrong and then nuzzled Mona happily. His old herd had forced him to learn every wild skill and one of them was fighting and now it was time to put the practice into a real fight.
His tail swished around his flanks and he arched his boa proudly. "Mountain Springs is mine and still will be after this battle so good luck Rapture as your going to need it" he laughed deeply and looked into Mona's eyes. His mind flashed to Aleena and their little affair so he drew his gaze quickly to Rapture and smiled at him. "My friend, your rules all seem to unfair to me" he said and sighed "my rule is one tiny thing and that is that you don't come back if you loose" he thought this was fair as if he, himself, wasn't to come back then why should his challenger.
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Post by fearless. on Nov 8, 2008 0:08:55 GMT -5
Rapture shook his head and struck his hoove against the ground. He couldn't believe that they were asking him to just back down and walk away. What kind of wuss would do that? Apparently mister Batter would. What kind of name is Batty anyways? Rapture didn't understand where they came up with these names anymore...
His auds pricked with interest as a mare approached them. He studied her momentarily before returning his gaze back to Batter. "So, BattER, your mare here says anything and she'll try to make it happen. Well...I want her. She comes with me and you can keep your precious land. But that doesn't mean I won't be back. It means that I spare you this one time." He grinned towards the mare and raised his eyebrows. She said anything...
Rapture wasn't really a bad stallion, he just knew when to show some attitude and when not to. Now definitely called for some. He turned towards the mare and said, "So what's it gonna be? Give him his land and come with me or fight? The choice is entirely yours." He grinned and flicked his tail cooly, waiting for one of them to reply.
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Post by r o x y on Nov 8, 2008 10:00:42 GMT -5
Mona closed her eyes and sighed heavily as his response came. She should have known that's what he would want from them. Most stallions were like that. If it means my love can keep his land, I will do it. She'd do anything for Batty, anything he wanted her to do. That's what came with caring for someone as she did for Batty. She would throw her life out the window for him, just to keep him happy. That's all that really mattered to her.
Mona turned her head to look at her mate. She closed her eyes again and took a deep breath, trying to calm herself down. Batty, I must do it. You can prepare for the fight that will come later. Get more stallions, recruit a few more friends so we can win this. It will give us time to prepare. I'll be fine, you must not worry about me. Worry about your land, the herd! You know my heart belongs only to you, and that is something that will never change. You will always be my love, and hopefully I'll be yours too.
Mona turned her head back to Rapture, and fought hard not to lunge at him that very moment. If I come with you I'd like to make myself very clear on this one term. I am in no way, shape, or form your mate. As you just heard, my heart belongs to and with Batty, and that isn't about to change. You are not mate, and I will not consider you that ever. Mona ranted slightly, before collecting herself again. Being his mate could be another term, which she would have to give in to. Although she wasn't sure how Batty would react to that sort of demand.
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Post by fearless. on Nov 8, 2008 16:44:34 GMT -5
Rapture chuckled as the mare agreed to his terms. His auds twitched anticipatingly for Batty's response. Would he be upset? The buckskin nodded and said, "You are a smart mare..sorry, I didn't catch your name.." He flicked his tail swiftly before listening to the mare.
A laugh escaped his kissers as she snapped at him. "Don't worry, mare. Do you really take me as stupid? I can't force you to love me...that I know for sure." Rapture smirked towards Batty and pawed the ground confidently. He just had one more thing to make clear.
"Oh ya, Batty. If you try to steal her back, then I'll kill her and then take your land. So don't even think about it." He grinned cruelly, knowing that the stag wouldn't risk his mate's life.
Rapture waited impatiently for the other stallion's reply to his request. Hopefully he would just take his land and be done.
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Post by r o x y on Nov 8, 2008 17:01:46 GMT -5
Mona could sense what he was plotting to do, and tried to stop it the best she could. She nuzzled Batty's neck, then his cheek. I love you Batty, beyond what words can explain. Please don't forget me, but feel free to move on. You deserve this land, and I will not stand in the way of that. I couldn't live with myself if I did. she took one last moment to nuzzle her beloved mate, before turning back to Rapture.
Mona sighed heavily before continuing. Leave this land now, and I will follow. I belong to you now, but my heart will forever be with Batty and this land. Mona closed her eyes and took a step towards Rapture, and away from Batty. Her pillars felt like they were filled with cement, as she tried to move away from her love and towards her worst nightmare. She belonged to him now.
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Post by fearless. on Nov 8, 2008 17:22:43 GMT -5
Rapture watched as the mare said her goodbyes to Batty. He almost felt sorry for her...almost. He really wasn't a cruel stallion, Batty brought this upon himself by refusing to fight. Rapture stamped his hoof and shook his head, ridding the flies.
He smiled reasuringly to the mare as she turned to face him. She was doing the right thing. He nodded solemly towards her and then raised his head towards Batty. "Remember...don't try and get her back..." He then trotted a circle around them and made his way towards the exit. "Come on, mare. I shall have land before you know it." With that said, he loped out of Mountain Springs without a backwards glance. Batty could have this land...he had a mare and thats all he needed. He smiled to himself and kicked up some dirt as he rain.
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Post by r o x y on Nov 8, 2008 17:38:32 GMT -5
Mona took one last longing glance at Batty before trotting after Rapture. She fought hard to blink back the tears that were trying to make there way over her eye lids. She'd been through a lot with Batty, and she loved him more then words could explain, and leaving him would be the hardest thing she'd ever do. It was also the best thing she could do for him. He deserved his land more then she deserved him, and she loved him enough to except that.
As Mona caught up with Rapture, she didn't so much as glance at him. She couldn't allow herself to get even remotely close to him, she didn't want any relationship to grow between them. She just wanted to live by him long enough for her to escape later. My name is Mona. She said coldly.
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