Post by Spitz on Dec 17, 2008 16:31:59 GMT -5
chapter 1 is up!
lol...that the story?!? yeah right! Everything about it is wrong A. she is just putting a recount which is boring B. Apparently she has no feelings. So I will get to you with the better chapter later.
I walked out of the cabin and up to the top neck where the moon shone onto the decks and the sky was lightened by its brightness. Everyone started to come up to the deck and then I looked up to see the moon full. My shape started to change at once…a normal process. Hair started to grow quickly on my skin and I dropped down onto my paws and my teeth grew sharper in the night. “Would all werepires please take a controlling potion if they have not already” came the voice from the top deck. The captain stood and he looked into my eyes, I couldn’t help but gaze back into them and smile. He was just wonderful, kind and supportive as he had picked me up when I found out that I had turned into a werepire. He then walked away so I walked to the rail of the ship and snarled as the rain started drop onto my pelt. My fangs then smelt blood, the bell rung and I moved swiftly through and toward the end of the ship to see another werepire had been hurt. She had been bitten. Then the jaws of Dylan were covered in blood and then heavy footsteps were heard coming toward us. “Dylan, what are you doing?” the captain said, his voice booming “hungry…need blood” came his gruff voice. “That is no excuse, you should of come to me” he said. He took Dylan and took him toward the tank which had just been put out and then turned on the tap, letting the red liquid pour into a glass. He gave it to Dylan who sipped at the blood before walking off and then I ran as fast as I could to get to the tank. This time I was first in line so getting a glass I turned on the tap and then watched as the blood swirled around as the glass filled. As someone took my place I took it in my paw like hands and sipped the liquid delicately. Then without warning a bell rung and the night was over so quickly. My body started to turn back and my elegant blond self came back so with a gulp of the last blood I walked swiftly back and into my cabin. Light was creeping up the horizon but luckily I was already back and into my cabin. Then the door opened again and the captain stepped inside before closing the door behind him “Olivia, I am sorry but the golden feather can’t be your home anymore”. I then put my hands over my face and felt my eyes prick with tears. It wasn’t long until my bags were packed and I was ready to leave the ship which had anchored just a short way off land. I put my suitcase in a small boat and grabbed the oars before Jane ran over “hurry Olivia, the sun will be up in just a hour” she said and then hurried away again. I began to row myself toward shore and in just forty minutes I was on the beach and running toward a inn. When I had paid to stay is when I looked out the window and saw the ship and then took out a telescope and looked closer at the ship and saw the captain looking again, staring into my eyes. He lifted his hand and waved at me as the anchor was lifted. I waved back as the ship started to move and went away and then off the horizon. Sun started to streak through the window, my skin started to grow hot so the curtains were quickly pulled shut so the room was dark. “Bye bye, golden feather” I whispered and then sat on the edge of my bed, waiting for the right moment. I unpacked my suitcase and then took a notebook and wrote three words get a ship on its first page. My journey wasn’t over.
lol...that the story?!? yeah right! Everything about it is wrong A. she is just putting a recount which is boring B. Apparently she has no feelings. So I will get to you with the better chapter later.