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Post by k y e e - the awesomest on Aug 22, 2008 12:34:56 GMT -5
You refuse to see, The cruelty in life.
The rope burns and scars, Are there for everyone to see.
But you do not see them, With your blind eye.
Just a little poem. If you don't like, don't comment. Crits are allowed.
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Post by ssahara on Aug 22, 2008 12:37:16 GMT -5
What do you mean?! Its brilliant! Or at least, I love it.
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Post by k y e e - the awesomest on Aug 22, 2008 12:39:08 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by FalconX on Aug 22, 2008 12:40:36 GMT -5
I love it <3 =D
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Post by k y e e - the awesomest on Aug 22, 2008 12:41:55 GMT -5
Thanks! That means a lot, coming from such a great poet like you.
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Post by FalconX on Aug 22, 2008 12:58:35 GMT -5
xDDD ch'ya right hehe
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