Post by Spitz on Mar 9, 2009 16:09:53 GMT -5
No telling me how to make better, its my poem and I wrote it the way I wanted to. Thanks for reading.
I stared into space,
My eyes watered,
You were leaving.
I would be alone,
Without you to hold,
My arms would be empty.
My words would never describe you,
But your eyes were comforting,
The deep chocolate brown.
The first time I saw you,
Was like seeing a angel,
Someone I finally knew I could trust.
You were my soul mate,
Someone to guide me,
Someone to love me.
But then you left,
I died and cried inside,
I would never be the same again.
I stared into space,
My eyes watered,
You were leaving.
I would be alone,
Without you to hold,
My arms would be empty.
My words would never describe you,
But your eyes were comforting,
The deep chocolate brown.
The first time I saw you,
Was like seeing a angel,
Someone I finally knew I could trust.
You were my soul mate,
Someone to guide me,
Someone to love me.
But then you left,
I died and cried inside,
I would never be the same again.