I'd Ask..

[X-Larain]

I'd Ask

I'd ask for you to tell me something,
And I'd ask for it to be true.
But the words I want to ask you for,
I know they're not in you.

These words are simple,
They're small and not very long.
Yet these words hold so many things for me,
Even though to you,
They're absolutely wrong.

I'd ask you for the stars,
I'd ask you for the moon.
I'd ask you for anything at all,
And you'd give it to me too.

But these small words are just too hard,
For you to even think.
They're something new to you,
They appear as dark as ink.

But in truth they're bright,
And full of so much life.
In truth they're happy,
And bring so much joy.

I'd ask them from you.
I know I would,
I want to.
But these simple words,
Are just too much for you.

I think I could say them,
At least I could before.
But knowing that you don't feel the same,
I don't need those words anymore.

So instead I found some new ones,
They're especially just for you.
Since the day you told me to go,
I've been thinking,
I don't love you.
And now, that much is true.

[FalconX]

Very nice X <3
I like the emotion portrayed in the poem, and the general way it was written :] Wonderful job!

[X-Larain]

Thank-you Falcon!
Heh-heh.. I always thought the way I wrote poems kinda sucked.. ^^U

[Dermot]

I agree completely with FalconX. And X, your poems DO NOT suck!