Post by I Am Agent Z on Sept 18, 2009 19:24:29 GMT -5
Characters:
BEGINNING:
Axel Van Deriz - Main character
Matthew Alexander - Secondary main character
Sasha Lesoto - Minor character
Sasuke Varotto - Minor character
Marion Secille - Secondary Minor character
Middle-to-End:
Sarah Van Deriz - Main Character
Toby Van Deriz: Main Character
Sasuke: Minor
Matthew Alexander - Secondary main
Military Soldiers and Higher-ups: Secondary Minor
People of the town of DragonScale: Secondary Minor
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Plotline:
Prologue:
-Describe areas, culture, creatures, etc. in the world of Draconia
-Talk about Axel's beginnings
-Skip 23 Draco-sapien years
-Show Axel leaving a room (What happens in there stays there)
-Talk about Axel's general outlook on justice, mercy and competing
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Beginning:
-Matt talks to Axel about how this fight will be his last championship fight
-*flashback* Sasha challenges Axel to fight with Sasuke
-Axel is moved to the fighting arena
-the fight commences
-Axel is dealt a fatal wound
-Axel dies, show Marion in labor for Axel's twin children *fade to black here*
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Middle-to-end:
-fast forward 18 Draco-sapien years
-Describe mentality and personality of Toby and Sarah
-Toby is kidnapped
-Sarah sets off to find her brother
-Sarah finds Toby being held prisoner and forced to train for unknown Military reasons
-Sarah devises a plan to get Toby out
-Sarah, eventually, gets Toby out of the barracks
-Toby and Sarah head for town pof Dragonscale
-Toby and Sarah meet Axel's old trainer, Matthew Alexander
-Matt shows the twins some trophies that Axel had won while he was alive
-Toby and Sarah agree to train to take their father's place
-Toby goes into fighting and showing whereas Sarah goes into racing and showing
-Toby has a dream that tells him who killed their father
-After 3 more years, Toby and Sarah set out to find and challenge Sasuke
-3 days after they find and challenge him, the fight commences
-Matt runs into the arena in time to see Toby and Sarah deal a near-fatal blow to sasuke
-Toby and Sarah win the World championship
-Matt says in satisfactory voice "That'll do, Champs..." before walking off to talk to the press.
-end book with powerful epilogue.
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What I write will be below this post. ^^ Let me know what you think so far with every part I get up!
BEGINNING:
Axel Van Deriz - Main character
Matthew Alexander - Secondary main character
Sasha Lesoto - Minor character
Sasuke Varotto - Minor character
Marion Secille - Secondary Minor character
Middle-to-End:
Sarah Van Deriz - Main Character
Toby Van Deriz: Main Character
Sasuke: Minor
Matthew Alexander - Secondary main
Military Soldiers and Higher-ups: Secondary Minor
People of the town of DragonScale: Secondary Minor
________________________________________________
Plotline:
Prologue:
-Describe areas, culture, creatures, etc. in the world of Draconia
-Talk about Axel's beginnings
-Skip 23 Draco-sapien years
-Show Axel leaving a room (What happens in there stays there)
-Talk about Axel's general outlook on justice, mercy and competing
________________________
Beginning:
-Matt talks to Axel about how this fight will be his last championship fight
-*flashback* Sasha challenges Axel to fight with Sasuke
-Axel is moved to the fighting arena
-the fight commences
-Axel is dealt a fatal wound
-Axel dies, show Marion in labor for Axel's twin children *fade to black here*
_________________________
Middle-to-end:
-fast forward 18 Draco-sapien years
-Describe mentality and personality of Toby and Sarah
-Toby is kidnapped
-Sarah sets off to find her brother
-Sarah finds Toby being held prisoner and forced to train for unknown Military reasons
-Sarah devises a plan to get Toby out
-Sarah, eventually, gets Toby out of the barracks
-Toby and Sarah head for town pof Dragonscale
-Toby and Sarah meet Axel's old trainer, Matthew Alexander
-Matt shows the twins some trophies that Axel had won while he was alive
-Toby and Sarah agree to train to take their father's place
-Toby goes into fighting and showing whereas Sarah goes into racing and showing
-Toby has a dream that tells him who killed their father
-After 3 more years, Toby and Sarah set out to find and challenge Sasuke
-3 days after they find and challenge him, the fight commences
-Matt runs into the arena in time to see Toby and Sarah deal a near-fatal blow to sasuke
-Toby and Sarah win the World championship
-Matt says in satisfactory voice "That'll do, Champs..." before walking off to talk to the press.
-end book with powerful epilogue.
_______________________________________________
What I write will be below this post. ^^ Let me know what you think so far with every part I get up!