Post by Forte! on Nov 2, 2008 15:31:10 GMT -5
NaNoWrimo is for quantity, not quality. While I hope it's not too random, you might have to bear with me on this one xD
"Oh! The sea goes in, the sea goes out, the sea blah blah blah... mm mm mm!" The song was a fleeting thing, reckless and load, occasionally rising above the roar of the tide as it crashed on the high butte of black rocks, chasing them further inland. A doddering old man stumbled through the tide, looking as if the lick of the waves would topple him at any moment. In his bone-white hands he clutched a small bundle to his breast, which moved occasionally as the singing piped up at a hideous frequency. "Oh, my soul, my soul, my soul for a baby from the sea! And a turtle, at that!" the blankets fell across his thin arms, revealing pink flesh and screwed up eyes. The bundle suddenly started rustling, kicking out high-pitched wails at high frequency as it opened startling blue eyes, already turning the indigo color that all babies possess before their eyes change to green or brown or any color in between.
The strange progression continued along the seashore, the baby now wailing at the top of its lungs. Birds took wing from the forest as they passed, in great flocks that were nearly as rapturous as the cries of the infant. The old man was walking in drunken forms of roughly the same appearance of the crested waves. On the edge of the horizon the impenetrable wall of black rock began to open, yawning to reveal a line of pasture dotted with what looked from a distance like snowflakes. A line of domed, squat wooden huts pervaded the foreground, and a jetty suddenly launched out over the violently swelling sea. The old man stopped and grinned, revealing crooked yellow teeth, and the baby twisted in its swaddling and ceased its wailing as it stared, enraptured at the little seaside town.
"Come, little prince! your carriage awaits!" the old man crooned, and the baby whimpered softly as it was carried lopsidedly towards the huts. A cow looked up in boredom and gave a little low before lowering its head to the thin grass in the small paddock in which it was contained. The baby, disturbed by the noise, at once picked up its loud, screaming cry, and the old man began to grin and hum to himself. A mangy dog looked up from where it was sleeping and laid its ears back, baying suddenly and dashing off into the little band of trees that embraced the line of huts with its tail between its legs. When the baby's crying did not cease, a door suddenly flew open and a fluster woman popped out of the door, plump frame bouncing down the stairs and pink cheeks flushed with something akin to annoyance.
"What do yer think yer doing with that there babby?" she demanded, and the old man smiled and started singing and staggering a bit drunkenly. The woman stepped forward and took the baby from his hands, staring down at the little pink face as the crying stopped. The man simply grinned holding out his hands, and the woman looked as if she were going to rip him to pieces at any instant. "Now, lookie here, you varmint! Where did you get this babby? He's not from 'rount these parts, and he's scarcely bigger'n a newborn!"
"Aye! He's just a little prince, you see! A prince of the seas!" crooned the old man, twirling in place like a top, impervious to the outside world. "'E's just a little turtle, you see. His parents have gone away... gone away... as happy as larks, too! So the sea is his mother, and the sky is his father, and you are going to take him in!" The woman stared at him for an instant, before wrapping the baby up in the blanket and turning her attention away. She was sensible, and could see that nothing was going to get through to this old coot. All she had gleaned was that the baby was a foundling, a lost one, and that he needed a home. For certainly the old man had not been taking very good care of him.
"Well, sir! it's not polite to go 'round dumpin babbys on folks!" she spat. But when she looked p, the old man was already gone. Apparently he had a turn of foot that was much faster than his doddering belied. "Well, I dare say that was odd, was it not, littlun?" The baby was staring up at her with his big indigo eyes, and hadn't moved a muscle. For a moment concern flickered across the woman's face, and then she rushed back into the little house, where she was immediately greeted by a small, dirty little girl in a torn dress.
"Whatcha got there, ma?" the girl demanded, standing on her tiptoes lo look at the package that her mother held. "A babby! Ma, where'd you get yerself a babby from?" She followed the large woman as she clomped across the small room, demanding to know what was being done. Ma gave her a sharp look, and immediately the girl shut her mouth and sat down dejectedly in a nearby chair with a worried frown.
"Hush, Analee! I'll tell you later, when we get this babby settled. He's our responsibility, now." This was enough for Analee, who immediately turned her attention to the things that her mother was doing. She plopped the baby in Analee's arms after a moment, now clad in a clean diaper. "Here, hun, hold the babby for a moment. I have to go fetch the cot out of the cellar, and I daresay we'll have to git 'im some goat's milk. Analee stared at the unwelcome bundle, frowning, her brow furrowed as she stared at the little boy in her hands.
Ma emerged from the cellar, carrying a wooden cot that was shedding dust all over the carpet. Here was a woman who could stand heavy work, the muscles in her arms defined as she hauled the massive, heavy wooden basket into a corner of the room. the baby was wrenched from Analee's arms and laid in the thing, still as placid as he had been before. A happy gurgle rose from his throat as he grasped the wooden bars, grinning toothlessly at his new caretakers before he closed his eyes with a soft little sigh, pink cheeks marred with happy dimples. Ma gave him a tender smile, grabbing Analee roughly by the arm and hauling her out to the garden. A nanny goat baaed at them in alarm, raising her gristled old head at the strange disturbance that had entered the air. She was an old goat, one who had lived a full life and was enjoying her retirement.
"Hallo, Nana, sorry ter disturb you," Ma exclaimed, as the old nanny stood up and gave her its best annoyed glare. Analee remained silent, watching from the doorway as her mother hastily milked the goat. The nanny didn't even seem to have realized what had happened until it was already done and a half pail of milk was dragged in doors. Analee followed her mother silently, watching as an old wooden bottle was fetched, filled, and nippled. When her mother had finally sat down, cradling the baby, the young girl finally spoke again.
"Ma, what's 'is name, at least?" she asked, hovering by the door. the baby was suckling ravenously, as if he had never been fed before in his life. "'E's horrible thin, you know. What happened to 'im?" Ma looked up from her charge, stunned out of a matriarchal reverie, and a troubled look came over her face. Ma was a woman not easily flustered, she'd seen a lot in her day. She had remained remarkably unfazed by this whole ordeal until now. She looked totally flummoxed, and the baby stopped suckling for an instant, his mouth moving slowly around the nipple as he stared up at the woman above him.
“I don't have an inkling, Anna,” she said, and the baby resumed draining the bottle, “E's a foundling, we shan't have a clue where 'e's come from, I reckon.” Annalee furrowed her brow, sucking on her little thumb, rolling it around her cheek pensively. Normally, Ma would have ripped the thumb out of her mouth, but at the moment she permitted it, a frown lacing the edges of her normally blank face. “I suppose we'll have to name 'im, though. It's the day of the turtle, so think of a nice turtle name for 'im, shall we?” Annalee brightened up at the prospect of being able to name the baby, and immediately began ticking off names.
“We could call 'im Gawain, after the wise one. Turtles are supposed to be wise... or... Jeremiah, or Ysabel,” she ticked off quickly, naming several names that were more fantasy than anything that a real child would be named. Ma tuned out after the first few, rocking the child gently on her knees. He had finished drinking now, and was looking rather content, cheeks flushed and indigo eyes half-closed, a quiet purr rising from his throat.
“Jeremiah... I think that'll do it nicely,” she crooned, stroking the child's cheek with a forefinger. Analee stopped rattling of names and stuck her thumb back into her mouth, staring a bit reverentially at the child that her mother cradled. For a long moment they sat, Jeremiah, Analee, and Ma, looking as happy as clams despite the growing discontent that the day held. Jeremiah gave another happy sigh, closing his eyes and laying his head on Ma's chest with an exhaustion that belied his busy day. Analee sucked her thumb quietly as Ma laid him in the cradle, where the eyes flashed open again before locking shut again.
“Ma, I reckon we ought to be alright now. You, Jeremiah, and me.” Analee whispered, clinging to her mother's arm as she stared at the little child in the cradle. Ma nodded, eyes glazing as she stared at the fire that blazed in the small hearth. She knew that her daughter was talking about her father, who had disappeared several months ago after going off to fight the war. The roughshod family was quiet again for a long time, as the baby sighed in the firelight, breathing slowing to the calmness of his sleep. Then, as the fire faded to black, Analee too slumped into the stupor that nighttime brought.
Ma looked on into the fading embers, her wide green eyes troubled. Before she, too, went off to bed, she looked at the strange changeling who had now invaded their family so completely after such a short time. With a shiver, she stroked Jeremiah's light dusting of hair, running a finger along a distinct cowlick. She felt none of the peace that her daughter had spoken of, none of the rightness. It seemed that a time of trouble had just begun...
"Oh! The sea goes in, the sea goes out, the sea blah blah blah... mm mm mm!" The song was a fleeting thing, reckless and load, occasionally rising above the roar of the tide as it crashed on the high butte of black rocks, chasing them further inland. A doddering old man stumbled through the tide, looking as if the lick of the waves would topple him at any moment. In his bone-white hands he clutched a small bundle to his breast, which moved occasionally as the singing piped up at a hideous frequency. "Oh, my soul, my soul, my soul for a baby from the sea! And a turtle, at that!" the blankets fell across his thin arms, revealing pink flesh and screwed up eyes. The bundle suddenly started rustling, kicking out high-pitched wails at high frequency as it opened startling blue eyes, already turning the indigo color that all babies possess before their eyes change to green or brown or any color in between.
The strange progression continued along the seashore, the baby now wailing at the top of its lungs. Birds took wing from the forest as they passed, in great flocks that were nearly as rapturous as the cries of the infant. The old man was walking in drunken forms of roughly the same appearance of the crested waves. On the edge of the horizon the impenetrable wall of black rock began to open, yawning to reveal a line of pasture dotted with what looked from a distance like snowflakes. A line of domed, squat wooden huts pervaded the foreground, and a jetty suddenly launched out over the violently swelling sea. The old man stopped and grinned, revealing crooked yellow teeth, and the baby twisted in its swaddling and ceased its wailing as it stared, enraptured at the little seaside town.
"Come, little prince! your carriage awaits!" the old man crooned, and the baby whimpered softly as it was carried lopsidedly towards the huts. A cow looked up in boredom and gave a little low before lowering its head to the thin grass in the small paddock in which it was contained. The baby, disturbed by the noise, at once picked up its loud, screaming cry, and the old man began to grin and hum to himself. A mangy dog looked up from where it was sleeping and laid its ears back, baying suddenly and dashing off into the little band of trees that embraced the line of huts with its tail between its legs. When the baby's crying did not cease, a door suddenly flew open and a fluster woman popped out of the door, plump frame bouncing down the stairs and pink cheeks flushed with something akin to annoyance.
"What do yer think yer doing with that there babby?" she demanded, and the old man smiled and started singing and staggering a bit drunkenly. The woman stepped forward and took the baby from his hands, staring down at the little pink face as the crying stopped. The man simply grinned holding out his hands, and the woman looked as if she were going to rip him to pieces at any instant. "Now, lookie here, you varmint! Where did you get this babby? He's not from 'rount these parts, and he's scarcely bigger'n a newborn!"
"Aye! He's just a little prince, you see! A prince of the seas!" crooned the old man, twirling in place like a top, impervious to the outside world. "'E's just a little turtle, you see. His parents have gone away... gone away... as happy as larks, too! So the sea is his mother, and the sky is his father, and you are going to take him in!" The woman stared at him for an instant, before wrapping the baby up in the blanket and turning her attention away. She was sensible, and could see that nothing was going to get through to this old coot. All she had gleaned was that the baby was a foundling, a lost one, and that he needed a home. For certainly the old man had not been taking very good care of him.
"Well, sir! it's not polite to go 'round dumpin babbys on folks!" she spat. But when she looked p, the old man was already gone. Apparently he had a turn of foot that was much faster than his doddering belied. "Well, I dare say that was odd, was it not, littlun?" The baby was staring up at her with his big indigo eyes, and hadn't moved a muscle. For a moment concern flickered across the woman's face, and then she rushed back into the little house, where she was immediately greeted by a small, dirty little girl in a torn dress.
"Whatcha got there, ma?" the girl demanded, standing on her tiptoes lo look at the package that her mother held. "A babby! Ma, where'd you get yerself a babby from?" She followed the large woman as she clomped across the small room, demanding to know what was being done. Ma gave her a sharp look, and immediately the girl shut her mouth and sat down dejectedly in a nearby chair with a worried frown.
"Hush, Analee! I'll tell you later, when we get this babby settled. He's our responsibility, now." This was enough for Analee, who immediately turned her attention to the things that her mother was doing. She plopped the baby in Analee's arms after a moment, now clad in a clean diaper. "Here, hun, hold the babby for a moment. I have to go fetch the cot out of the cellar, and I daresay we'll have to git 'im some goat's milk. Analee stared at the unwelcome bundle, frowning, her brow furrowed as she stared at the little boy in her hands.
Ma emerged from the cellar, carrying a wooden cot that was shedding dust all over the carpet. Here was a woman who could stand heavy work, the muscles in her arms defined as she hauled the massive, heavy wooden basket into a corner of the room. the baby was wrenched from Analee's arms and laid in the thing, still as placid as he had been before. A happy gurgle rose from his throat as he grasped the wooden bars, grinning toothlessly at his new caretakers before he closed his eyes with a soft little sigh, pink cheeks marred with happy dimples. Ma gave him a tender smile, grabbing Analee roughly by the arm and hauling her out to the garden. A nanny goat baaed at them in alarm, raising her gristled old head at the strange disturbance that had entered the air. She was an old goat, one who had lived a full life and was enjoying her retirement.
"Hallo, Nana, sorry ter disturb you," Ma exclaimed, as the old nanny stood up and gave her its best annoyed glare. Analee remained silent, watching from the doorway as her mother hastily milked the goat. The nanny didn't even seem to have realized what had happened until it was already done and a half pail of milk was dragged in doors. Analee followed her mother silently, watching as an old wooden bottle was fetched, filled, and nippled. When her mother had finally sat down, cradling the baby, the young girl finally spoke again.
"Ma, what's 'is name, at least?" she asked, hovering by the door. the baby was suckling ravenously, as if he had never been fed before in his life. "'E's horrible thin, you know. What happened to 'im?" Ma looked up from her charge, stunned out of a matriarchal reverie, and a troubled look came over her face. Ma was a woman not easily flustered, she'd seen a lot in her day. She had remained remarkably unfazed by this whole ordeal until now. She looked totally flummoxed, and the baby stopped suckling for an instant, his mouth moving slowly around the nipple as he stared up at the woman above him.
“I don't have an inkling, Anna,” she said, and the baby resumed draining the bottle, “E's a foundling, we shan't have a clue where 'e's come from, I reckon.” Annalee furrowed her brow, sucking on her little thumb, rolling it around her cheek pensively. Normally, Ma would have ripped the thumb out of her mouth, but at the moment she permitted it, a frown lacing the edges of her normally blank face. “I suppose we'll have to name 'im, though. It's the day of the turtle, so think of a nice turtle name for 'im, shall we?” Annalee brightened up at the prospect of being able to name the baby, and immediately began ticking off names.
“We could call 'im Gawain, after the wise one. Turtles are supposed to be wise... or... Jeremiah, or Ysabel,” she ticked off quickly, naming several names that were more fantasy than anything that a real child would be named. Ma tuned out after the first few, rocking the child gently on her knees. He had finished drinking now, and was looking rather content, cheeks flushed and indigo eyes half-closed, a quiet purr rising from his throat.
“Jeremiah... I think that'll do it nicely,” she crooned, stroking the child's cheek with a forefinger. Analee stopped rattling of names and stuck her thumb back into her mouth, staring a bit reverentially at the child that her mother cradled. For a long moment they sat, Jeremiah, Analee, and Ma, looking as happy as clams despite the growing discontent that the day held. Jeremiah gave another happy sigh, closing his eyes and laying his head on Ma's chest with an exhaustion that belied his busy day. Analee sucked her thumb quietly as Ma laid him in the cradle, where the eyes flashed open again before locking shut again.
“Ma, I reckon we ought to be alright now. You, Jeremiah, and me.” Analee whispered, clinging to her mother's arm as she stared at the little child in the cradle. Ma nodded, eyes glazing as she stared at the fire that blazed in the small hearth. She knew that her daughter was talking about her father, who had disappeared several months ago after going off to fight the war. The roughshod family was quiet again for a long time, as the baby sighed in the firelight, breathing slowing to the calmness of his sleep. Then, as the fire faded to black, Analee too slumped into the stupor that nighttime brought.
Ma looked on into the fading embers, her wide green eyes troubled. Before she, too, went off to bed, she looked at the strange changeling who had now invaded their family so completely after such a short time. With a shiver, she stroked Jeremiah's light dusting of hair, running a finger along a distinct cowlick. She felt none of the peace that her daughter had spoken of, none of the rightness. It seemed that a time of trouble had just begun...